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Hug me, for I feel alone. Listen to me, for I feel unheard. Talk with me, and let’s laugh together, dancing naked in the snow underneath the singing stars. Accept me as I am, for I wish to be no other. Love me, for I am you.
I'm curious about the title-and I'm not sure where it fits in, to be honest. I told you already--images are a big thing for me--I feel like this one really spells it out, which perhaps is your point. But maybe there's a way to say it that's more metaphorical? I really love the message here--especially at the end--and that is the most important part, perhaps.
And the line "dancing naked in the snow underneath the singing stars" is my favorite part. Goodness.
title- didn't know what to title it, so I randomly pulled a word out of my butt, and "from" was it. maybe I should just start titling everything "untitled"? that's wayyy too boring though, and even worse than not having a title...
hmmm metaphors. will think on it (while in outhouse) ;)
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I'm curious about the title-and I'm not sure where it fits in, to be honest.
I told you already--images are a big thing for me--I feel like this one really spells it out, which perhaps is your point. But maybe there's a way to say it that's more metaphorical?
I really love the message here--especially at the end--and that is the most important part, perhaps.
And the line "dancing naked in the snow underneath the singing stars" is my favorite part. Goodness.
lololololovelolololololalalalalooloolocololooooo
just felt like spelling that out
:B
huggiessss!!!!
title- didn't know what to title it, so I randomly pulled a word out of my butt, and "from" was it. maybe I should just start titling everything "untitled"? that's wayyy too boring though, and even worse than not having a title...
hmmm metaphors. will think on it (while in outhouse) ;)
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